Is my version better than the original?
I love this change, I'm sure Brett and the team are already using it!
Great makeover, makes for an exciting story without losing all the valuable information and insights they had in their OG deck.
Up for sending you our pitch deck for a teardown but the CTA at the end of your post is opening an "about:blank" page.
This is a great example of why start-ups should have an external consultant as part of their pitch team . One or two people (i love the pitch/business/communication consultant and the graphic designer combo!!!) who can add clarity, brevity and even a bit of graphic style simplification to your presentations. Pitch decks are compelling stories - not business presentations. Nice work Raymond!